Writing Task 1: The Basics
Step 3: Rewrite the story from Step 2, but combine some of the sentences using "Subordination".
(See p 7 & p 9 in the BASICs Handout.)
You may add new information to make your complex sentences.
You can use "simple sentences" & "compound sentences" & "complex sentences" on this page.
Title:
The person is called Abdullah, and he's from Saudi Arabia. He lives in a beautiful city that is called Alkhobar. He's in the mid 20's, even though he hasn't gone to college, yet. He loves his family, and they love him as well. Since he wanted to learn new language, he went to U.S. to learn English. He got married as soon as he finished studying in U.S. 10 years later, he had 3 children. He got hired to a good position in his work place before he bought a new house to live in for the rest of his life. By the time he got his Master's degree, his first son got married. Ten years after he got married he had a child, and he named his child Borat. Borat decided to achieve his dream which was being an artist because he did not enjoy his postion in his dad's company. He decided to go to Paris, so he can start his artistic career. When Borat wanted to be a famous artist where he can show people his work, he devoted all his time and effort to reach that goal. After four years of hard work, Borat decided to go back to Al Khobar to see his family, so he called his father and informed him that he will be back home soon. Abdullah rushed to the airport to pickup his son, however Borat arrived to AlKhobar holding two young girls. They were his daughters Faswa and Fsyah, but Abdullah was in shock because he knew nothing about his granddaughters. Borat told his father all about his life in Paris while Abdullah was in tears and speechless. Abdullah welcomed his new granddaughters, and he told welcome back. From the day Abdullah saw his granddaughters, and he never got apart from his angels as he calls them. They all lived a happily ever after it was like a fairy tale.
Step 3: Rewrite the story from Step 2, but combine some of the sentences using "Subordination".
(See p 7 & p 9 in the BASICs Handout.)
You may add new information to make your complex sentences.
You can use "simple sentences" & "compound sentences" & "complex sentences" on this page.
Title:
The person is called Abdullah, and he's from Saudi Arabia. He lives in a beautiful city that is called Alkhobar. He's in the mid 20's, even though he hasn't gone to college, yet. He loves his family, and they love him as well. Since he wanted to learn new language, he went to U.S. to learn English. He got married as soon as he finished studying in U.S. 10 years later, he had 3 children. He got hired to a good position in his work place before he bought a new house to live in for the rest of his life. By the time he got his Master's degree, his first son got married. Ten years after he got married he had a child, and he named his child Borat. Borat decided to achieve his dream which was being an artist because he did not enjoy his postion in his dad's company. He decided to go to Paris, so he can start his artistic career. When Borat wanted to be a famous artist where he can show people his work, he devoted all his time and effort to reach that goal. After four years of hard work, Borat decided to go back to Al Khobar to see his family, so he called his father and informed him that he will be back home soon. Abdullah rushed to the airport to pickup his son, however Borat arrived to AlKhobar holding two young girls. They were his daughters Faswa and Fsyah, but Abdullah was in shock because he knew nothing about his granddaughters. Borat told his father all about his life in Paris while Abdullah was in tears and speechless. Abdullah welcomed his new granddaughters, and he told welcome back. From the day Abdullah saw his granddaughters, and he never got apart from his angels as he calls them. They all lived a happily ever after it was like a fairy tale.